Keeping PetsSome people believe that keeping pets is a good thing to do. They believe that pets, like cats and dogs, can help reduce the loneliness in their daily life also argue that keeping pets helps mankind understand animals world and develop positive feelings toward , however, hold the opposite view. They think keeping pets as a useless but harmful thing to do. First, pets can transmit diseases. Secondly, the noises of pets are sources of pollution. Last but not least, as many rare birds and animals are kept as pets, they will surely be hunted on a large scale, which means a threat to the balance of the the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Anyway, we can lessen our loneliness and express our love toward animals in other ways. And it is my belief that only by placing man and other species on an equal basis can we expect to have a lively and colorful world
英语作文:养宠物的好处与坏处
Nowadays, alomost every family has adog or a cat as a pet.
Because the can bring us we have something uahappy and dont want to tell anyone else,we can alwaystalk with our pets,though perhaps they dontunderstand at all.
But if we do so we will fell muchbetter,especially when were adults are busy and have no timeto look after their parents.
A pet will always a best present to the ,keeping a pet will also bring us quite a lot trouble.
For example,most pets are very dirty andthey have a lot of diseases with them whichwill make us ill.
Sometimes a dog will bite someone whomay just want to touch it to express hisfriendship.
In this way pets will also make peopleunhappy!
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